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Ummm...
I think I spend wayyyyy too much time lately chatting D:< I can't concentrate on anything when I'm at it! OTL This pic took foreverrrrrrrr (because of my recent chatting habits...)! I think I should practice... multitasking... 0uo Oh well! :'DDD

So anyways, idk why I drew this SUPER SHINEY DESU pic.. @u@ I actually have lots of other artwors to finish (or start?) right now D:< *procrastinator*
LOL I KNO THE HEAD IS KINDA TOO BIG FOR HER FUGLY BODY/POSE K? *u*b
kk. *goes to work on my other stuffs*


Tools: openCanvas 4

EDIT OK.. So putting into consideration of critiques and stuff, I edited the pic. *u* I decided to make her head (significantly) smaller lol and added more shadows (thanks for pointing that out *RC-MANGA *u*b I hope this looks better~!:'D (here's the old version if you didn't see it xD [link]) /EDIT

Critiques


:iconrc-manga:
First time I gave you a serious critique! Well, this is super cute i must say, despise of the fact that the character has a big head comparing her body (well you already knew that). And the colors are pretty sweet, too. But, there is something that maybe i must critique in this art: is the source of light. I mean, if this is a sunny day, and the girl is in fornt of the window, maybe some shadows and light source that coming out of the window would be nice, and aslo some shadows in the fornt of the girl and her surroundings would give it some realism in the illustration. But, overall, the composition looks fantastic.
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:iconl3m0nt3a:
You cant practice multitasking. Its a given skill XDD

Anyways pretty work.

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:iconnightmaresky:
Cute! Great work on the anatomy.

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:iconuntitled-chan:
This is cute [: I love the eyes and the hair <333 >///< Awesome~!!
:icondatsuki:
ah its so cute but her head is so big >< i do that alot
:iconxhunt:
SO CUTE~ I love the way that the bode flows

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:iconchankonabe:
gawddd D":!

i dont care howww young she lookkkk i want to rape herr D////<

her pose is sexxxyyy!!! :heart:
and that window is beautifull 0u0

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:iconruiiro:
She is so pretty. :aww:
:iconbishies-lover:
aaww she is sooo cute!!

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I wuv every single color and the hair! XD i always love the way you color your character's hair. The pic looks great even with the big head XD

Good lineart.
The left eye looks smaller than the right one.
I find a bit weird the pose of the right leg... XD i wouldn't be smiling with a leg like that... i bet it hurts. The left one looks more natural.

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